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PostSubject: Title: Somber   Wed Nov 26, 2008 12:25 am

Seeping steadily 'midst my soul
the world is shades of blue
The eyes of friends are black as coal,
their poison breath a crimson hue

Spiders legs ascend my spine;
I contemplate the fallen mass
Shakily I walk the line
between far hope and shattered glass

Broken windows, shutters drawn
crystal daggers wrought from pain
light from within them all but gone
What once was naught will be again
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PostSubject: Re: Title: Somber   Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:59 pm

i like it, nice rhyming, but what is it about exactly?
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PostSubject: Re: Title: Somber   Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:01 pm

generally about the how people are slowly decaying because of the original sin of humanity. I'm watching it happen to people I know and care about.
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PostSubject: Re: Title: Somber   Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:12 pm

oh... is it happening to me
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PostSubject: Re: Title: Somber   Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:16 pm

its happening to everyone, its inevitable. when i say friends in my poem, i refer to everyone
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PostSubject: Re: Title: Somber   Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:22 pm

oh, in your response though you made it sound like specific people
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