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PostSubject: Remembering a Dream   Sun Jan 23, 2011 5:38 pm

This morning when I woke, the body rose,
choked, spluttered, and began; rolled out of bed.
I was not there yet putting on its clothes
nor when it brushed its teeth nor combed its head.
But dimly I returned with the hot scrape
of bristled, frozen wind outside the door.
That day I walked, forgetting the night-scape
until stark trees against the sky loomed over.
A sudden rush of other selves converged
upon the axis of my shaken mind
From scenes faintly forgotten they emerged;
the skyward branches memories unbind.
The vision has departed since, but still
such moments leave me questioning the real.


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PostSubject: Reply   Sun Jan 23, 2011 6:04 pm

I don't know what to say about this one except that I really really enjoyed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Remembering a Dream   Sun Jan 23, 2011 6:27 pm

thanks for comments =)
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