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PostSubject: Shanes "Neo-Universe"   Tue Sep 23, 2008 11:30 pm

• The Neo-Universe is created by two “angels” really much higher in rank to their own angels.
• They create it by first creating children.
1. They each have their own children
2. for the first creator: Luxus, Ventus, Vesie, Sielue.
3. for the second: Tempe, Caligo, Terra, and Igneus.
• Children are: Luxus(Light)(male), Caligo(Dark)(male), Earth(Terra)(female), Water(vesie)(female)(or liquid or aqua), Fire(Ignius)(male), Air(Ventus)(male), Spirit(Sielue)(male), and Time(Tempe)(female)(she remains in high and rarely enters the lands of her brothers and sister.)
1. Caligo and Sielue have a son, Mentius, who is to be the father of all great thought, He provides intellect, knowledge, and was given wisdom by his mother(Spirit). He was also given the gift of cunning from his father(Caligo).
2. Earth and Luxus had a daughter named Hortele, who was blessed by earths sister water, and is the mother of all things green and growing(plant life).
3. Earth and Fire have a son Volcanae, who is the source of all things molten that churn under the earth. Fire took his son away from his mother at birth and brought him up on his own. Fire and Earth are enemies for a long time after.
4. Caligo and spirit have another child, Mortus. He is ruler of the dead and can animate life.
5. Luxus and Vesie have a daughter named Lunestia. She is mother of all moonlight. She takes many trips to visit her aunt Tempe in her high temples.
• The children of the creators, Live in the lands that their creators have provided for them for many years. They built mighty temples to house them and all their children.
• During the second festive age Luxus and Sielue lived together and had many children who, like their father, are powerful and courageous. They were also very wise and loving because their mother was sister-mother of all living beings (animal life) and new what was true through infinite experience. Many of these children are angels who guard the high temples.
1. When the children of Luxus and Spirit were old enough, Fire came into their home secretly and lured a female to follow him to his home. There they stayed and the Female bore fire a two daughters. The first was Vulele, who was very beautiful, but dangerous. She learned to deceive, from her uncle Caligo, and it was masked by kindness and tenderness. She was master of lies and influence, she is also a child of the inner fire.
2. The second child was Irrue, who could not speak. She was not wicked like her sister but she had a temper and anger brought her immense strength. Once Volcanae cracked a joke about her being mute. It took him a year to wedge his was out of a stone face he had been thrown into by Irrue. Irrues’ mother persuades her to run away and she does. Upon her escape she meets Ventus who is struck by her beauty and demeanor and falls deeply in love with her. Ventus was never a big talker.
• Irrue and Ventus give birth to two sons. The first is Fulgus. Fulgus has the ability to control lightning, the fire of the sky.
• The second son is Aviteus, who is surprisingly very loud at times. He controls all matter of vibrations, and he sings many songs for his mother father and brother. He spends much of his time creating the most wonderful music.
3. Now Vulele, who Spend much of her early life with her uncle Caligo, falls in love with Mentius, for only he can read her. Together they have a daughter, Cerite, who is mother of all insanity(burning of the mind or mind poison) but she is not held by it. Only in her rare and brief outbursts does she loose control. She also has some power over lust, and loves to dance. Cerites’ favorite playmates are Mortus and Volcanae, and she bares many children for them both.
• Vulele and Mentius have another child, a son, Astus. He is much like his mother and as smart as his father, but not so wise. He also has much power like his grandfather Caligo, who he spends much time with.
• The happy time begin to end. Brothers and sisters argue with each other. A great war breaks out between the first children and their children. In the end Ignius’ wife sacrifices herself to lock Ignius deep within the underworld.
• With the loss of his ally Caligo and his children are overpowered and also locked, but not as solidly as Ignius, in the underworld.
• Only Astus and Volcanae are left
• Astus goes into hiding for many hundreds of years.
• Volcanae falls in love with a child of Luxus and Sielue, and names her Cinise. Together they have many children who bear their grandfathers talent to wield fire.
• After the great war Luxus and Sielue retreat with their children to their high temples to look out over the land from abouve.
• Now only earth water and air remained, except Volcanaes’ children who are fire. Before their brother and sister left earth and water each chose a husband from the children of Luxus and Sielue.
• Earth, Water, Volcanae, and Air, continue to have children though the children no not from where they came from. Many people of all different shapes sizes and kinds filled the Lands bearing the gift of their fathers and mothers.
• Horlete also had a few children before she joined her father in the high temples.
• Eventually when the first children became tired of having children they each retreated to their own homes.
• With the absence of their parent the children of the lands grew bored and did not use their talents in the right way, so the two creators came down and took the gift of immortal life from many of the children. In return they filled their land with their own people and the land was filled with mortal life, and those who where still immortal were rarities upon the land.
• When you die you either become a slave to Mortus in the underworld or the two creators take you to the gates where you will travel on. The two creators came from those gates with their children. They go back through at time to visit their wives.




• Demon orb is sailed to ancient grounds. Demon is freed from the orb and possesses a servant.
• Demon is Astus.
• Demons goal is to open the door to the underworld.
• Demon opens door.
• He fails to open the door all the way but cracks it and allows evil to seep through.
• On a second attempt with extra power and more followers he succeeds.
• The demon class spreads far throughout the land.


• In response, Luxus, First among those of the two creators of the Neouniverse, will gather followers and grant them powers.
• The light side will grow, but their numbers will still be small in comparison.
• Some will fall to the dark.
• Followers are mostly those who already bear the gift of the angels.

(This was for the old system of rp but i think it could still be of some use.)
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PostSubject: Reply   Wed Sep 24, 2008 2:08 am

This is very old. I guess we could use this format of creation, mind we twik it of course, but Im not sure. I still like it but I think we should develope more resent story line and see where we get to.
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PostSubject: re   Wed Sep 24, 2008 6:34 am

the point is to just get ideas off of it right?
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PostSubject: Re: Shanes "Neo-Universe"   Wed Sep 24, 2008 9:34 am

Exactly
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PostSubject: Re: Shanes "Neo-Universe"   Tue Sep 30, 2008 10:36 am

i dont think that two angels should have created everything. it shoud be one entitywho is the father or mother (or neither gender) that created the universe or multiverse.
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PostSubject: Reply   Tue Sep 30, 2008 10:48 am

Here was my reasoning on the two angels. At the time I thought of that it was just Alex and me who were creating the rp, so I thought of it like this:
-All that our rp is made of is stuff that we are borrowing from god.
-None of our ideas can be original because we do not have true powers of creation.
-So, for a story I chase to step into future times when god and his people are one in heaven.
--Two men(Alex and I, or not if you wish), Ask God to let them try creating their own univers and beings under them.
--Because these two men were created by God and under God they knew no other creation but his, so in a way it is a branch of God's kingdom.
--The story goes on and God gives them permission and they set to work.
-Now the # of men who ask doesnt have to be two it could be 200 if you guys wanted.

-So in a way croft It is ruled by one entity.
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PostSubject: Re: Shanes "Neo-Universe"   Wed Oct 01, 2008 9:34 am

We just need to work on the idea of a creation story just so we dont really have to worry about it.
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PostSubject: Re: Shanes "Neo-Universe"   Wed Oct 01, 2008 6:34 pm

ok
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